Alireza Ameri
| September 6, 2007 | 12:06 AM
onomatopoem!!!
What is life?
a ma ma coo
a lesson for loo
a pubic doodle-doo
a test of how to woo
a cha cha dance
a ha ha comic
a wa wa panic
a la la sleep! (alireza ameri)
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salim
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September 6, 2007
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1:18 PM
a magnificent masterpiece, a sweet and bizarre work incepted in a fruitful mind
mina
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September 7, 2007
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12:35 AM
life is onomatopoeic itself
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live iconic factual earthen
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September 7, 2007
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3:15 AM
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The simplicity floating in this masterpiece -as Salim mentioned- makes it even harder to add to it !
actually, Who dares to?
But here is my part;
Life is
a whisper in your ear, a whimper with no tear
a pitter-patter heart; in time of depart
a fizzy-dizzy drink, to fake it all shrink
a grumble, rumble face, with no sign or trace!
actually, Who dares to?
But here is my part;
Life is
a whisper in your ear, a whimper with no tear
a pitter-patter heart; in time of depart
a fizzy-dizzy drink, to fake it all shrink
a grumble, rumble face, with no sign or trace!
abdoreza
on
September 7, 2007
at
6:24 PM
Only an onomatopoet can compose an onomatopoem!
Sara
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September 7, 2007
at
8:47 PM
What is life?
A no no nanny
A so so dady
A wonderful momy
!
A no no nanny
A so so dady
A wonderful momy
!
